by BreakMyWingsAndRun Sep 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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I wish someone would've told me, |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
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For one,I think it would be better if you broke it into stanzas of four lines instead of two.But all in all it was very well written && the emotion was great.It flowed smoothly && your word choice was excellent.5/5 |
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So good... So sad... So much emotion.... Argh please tell me this didn't really happen?? Awwww lvoe is the most painful, most wonderful thing EVER. |
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Sad, I like it very much. Had a nice flow to it, very well done.5/5 |
by bluefate
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So good... too sad though |