The Fallen Hero

by Kyle   Sep 8, 2007


Here he is the hero adored by all,
he sacrificed himself to help them all.
He gave was allowed, he did the best he could,
proud of his efforts strongly he stood.

But now it is a different time,
you see the hero constantly crying.

The one he loved stabbed his back with a devious knife,
his world fell apart and buried his life.
Between his knees hung his head,
wishing and hoping that he was dead.

The hero has fallen with noone there to help him stand,
there was noone there to take his hand.
People gave up on him and he was forgotten,
his memory gone, with sorrow his heart was rotten.

Shaking and trembling the hero takes his knife,
frantically stabbing and cutting away at his life.
The hero had one more soul to save before he truly fell,
he was saving his own soul from his brokenhearted hell.

As he lay there bleeding noone seemed to care,
in everyones heart he was no longer there.
and now the time has come when the hero died,
Noone noticed, noone cried.

The heros soul drifted towards the light above,
still in his heart he had love.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I really like this, it's beautiful.
    Keep up the great work, love.
    5/5
    -Heather

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow amazing work,touching and beautifully penned
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by xFallenAngelx

    Wow, i really think this is my favorite. i really love this one, its written so well and its beautiful. great work kyle!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    Wow..Wonderfully Written!! Keep It Up!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Krista

    Beutiful and depressing.
    :]
    great work.
    <3