The Friend I Had

by Rose Marie   Sep 8, 2007


The friend I had
Always made me laugh and cry
The friend I had
Always made me try

The friend I had
Had lots of friends
The friend I had
Always had new fashion trends

The friend I had
Is high up in the sky
I never got to say
I love you and good-byee

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  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    That was sooooooo sad.
    I don't know how I would react, if I ever got to lose one of my friends, without telling them how much they mean to me first.

    Love the repetition, and your chose of words.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I certainly didn't see that ending coming...so beautifully written and yet heartwrenching and moving at the same time.
    The only thing I didn't like was that you seemed to use a lot of fillers (I, and, you etc)
    if you try eliminating them sometimes it makes the flow much smoother, but other than this, this was a beautiful write.

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