Well done, the flow was good, this was a well written poem, with enough emotion and good imagery.
I thought you did a really great job.
Love Tara-Kay

I loved it unable to say the words 5/5

It was well penned, the imagery is great!! the usage of words is good!!

keep it up!

5/5 for it!

I liked how you made the ending s0o... hopeless..^_^
most people end these sad poems with 'light at the end of the tunnel' thing.. but this was flawlessly sad.. i loved it! =)

good flow, great wordings! 5/5! =)

Thats such a cool piece, because i can relate to at least what i think its about, everyline that i read, i go through on a daily basis, the frustration is so overwhelming sometimes, the poem itself was almost perfectly crafted, a wonderful read, enjoyable, and most expressive, thanks for allowing me to read it...
john

This is a really good poem. I could find only one mistake with it. in the first stanza the last line. Keep should be keeping.

Trust me i know what it is like to want to tell someone how you feel about them but you just dont have the guts yet to it.

Anyway this is a great poem. 5/5

Kalee

Beautifuly writen poem. I love the thought behind this. The flow is very good too. Keep it up!

-Yvonne

I relate to this poem and that is why i really like it

Well expressed thnx for thnx for mentioning this poem i really loved it. u have got so great talent

Wow. the flow was perfect, i couldn't see a flaw in this piece at all. 5/5

Don't be afraid..... :)

This piece was well expressed and the emotions were stong. Over all just a beautifully written poem. Well done. : )

Cicely

This piece was well expressed and the emotions were stong. Over all just a beautifully written poem. Well done. : )

Cicely

Loved it all i can say is i love the emotion

Wow. this is a beatiful poem