Thats really well written xxx

Good job i felt that u conveyed your emotions very well in this 1. 5/5

Beautiful poem
the line. "Your world is different from mine"
really captured the meaning.
5/5!

The title alone caught my attention but when i read the rest of it i thought it was very beautiful, and to deep for you to only be 16

Really good poem. =]]

amanda.

Love it:)
x
Joke

Very touching!

Very well written, so deep
i loved it great job
5/5

Woow this is really good and i love your word choices you use its really good. 5/5
kasia

This poem is really good, keep up the great work!! :D

I love this!!

AMAZING POEM I LOVED IT 5/5 INDEED...

Wow a beautiful write. very dep and filled with many emotions. you have a very unique writing style. i love your work.

Your world is different from mine
Darkness and sunshine
The mistakes we made were nothing
In darkness with all lights on, I stood looking

that was my favorite stanza. it was a great ending. i feel i understood this poem right from the start. excellent job. you should really think about writing more, your good at it. 5/5.

-Ashlei.