Comments : Darkness With All Lights On

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really well written xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Good job i felt that u conveyed your emotions very well in this 1. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Beautiful poem
    the line. "Your world is different from mine"
    really captured the meaning.
    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by jennifer wilson

    The title alone caught my attention but when i read the rest of it i thought it was very beautiful, and to deep for you to only be 16

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really good poem. =]]

    amanda.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlashLove

    Love it:)
    x
    Joke

  • 16 years ago

    by ToXiC lOvE

    Very touching!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarahh

    Very well written, so deep
    i loved it great job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Woow this is really good and i love your word choices you use its really good. 5/5
    kasia

  • 16 years ago

    by aMBerERiN

    This poem is really good, keep up the great work!! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Scared to say I LOVE YOU

    I love this!!

  • 15 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    AMAZING POEM I LOVED IT 5/5 INDEED...

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow a beautiful write. very dep and filled with many emotions. you have a very unique writing style. i love your work.

    Your world is different from mine
    Darkness and sunshine
    The mistakes we made were nothing
    In darkness with all lights on, I stood looking

    that was my favorite stanza. it was a great ending. i feel i understood this poem right from the start. excellent job. you should really think about writing more, your good at it. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.