The Art Of Crying

by Timothy r   Sep 10, 2007


Tears may fall, but what do they mean
without love and hate thinly between
tell a tale and live with the consequence
of constant sorrow as your penance

Raised to know right from wrong
days have become frightfully long
admittance now a lonely pledge
weary of life on the edge

Forgiveness a stones` throw away
from those your lies led astray
swallow the pride that impedes
enlightenment at God`s speed

Tears may fall, but what do they mean
without comfort and love in between
shorten the days of constant sorrow
repentance begins on the eve of tomorrow

© copyright 2007 by Timothy r

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a beautiful deep poem.
    Great flow.
    The last stanza was amazing.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    This piece left me speechless...
    It has some deep inner beauty and wisdom between the lines. The emotions are excellently expressed in the whole poem, and you did great job with rhymes.
    The ending stanza left the biggest impression on me, it is so effective!

    P.s- Thanks for the dance :)

  • 16 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Beautifully written, I applaud both your use of repetition as well as your skill.
    Just exquisite, I couldn't express my liking enough~
    =^^=
    5/5, keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    5/5 of course!!! Loved the rhymes!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow amazingly written
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

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