I really liked it and I even chuckled at the end. I know how rumors can be..they suck..but I really like the symbolism you used to describe them and how it bothered you. Good job!

By keeping your poem short you were able to convey to us that you were really pissed.. hehehehe

the words you used fit nicely with the flow.. it was a joy to read. yep, rumors are really horrible, they can even destroy a friendship that you never thought could be broken!

by the way..betwixt is another word for between.. :)

Rumours are terrible. They can ruin a lot of friendships, not to mention reputations. For a short poem, you really summed up how they affect someone.

Tammie

Nice work! Rumours can be hurtful at times. Its nice to see someone write a poem about it. Keep up the good work!

Bridget