Darkness

by 1Mistake   Sep 10, 2007


Fallen angel cries,
Haunting my every thought.
cuts deep like a knife with every breath.
Rusting chains holding my soul in place.
tear stained cheeks, a broken smile
A whisper in the dark,
A silent heart beat,
A wicked look,
A harsh grasp on my soul.
Breaking rusting chains,
A lifeless corpse on the floor.

(( O_o... this one is a lil on the odd side, kinda doesn't make sense... lol but o well!!)

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  • 16 years ago

    by KirbyParawhore

    Great poem, thanks for commenting mine btw
    very appreciated
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    I seemed to make sense out of it xD And thats amazing because its me. Its a good little poem, looking forward to reading more poems like this from you =D 5/5
    Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting poem, short but powerful. It has really effective rhythm and you wrote it greatly, you also expressed emotions excellently. Well done!

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