Magic World

by Isabella   Sep 11, 2007


Once upon a magic world,
so far away but yet close to here.
Is a world built on gold,
the gold from thoughts and dreams.

But far away from the magic world,
is a little boy walking alone.
In a world there is nothing but cold,
he dreams of happiness and nothing more.

He sleeps in the gutter,
there is no where to go.
He lay down and shutter,
so dirty and cold.

He begs for some bread,
but people don't care.
He never slept in a bed,
or anything alike.

He gives up all hope,
cause no one will ever care.
He starts to soap,
and lose his poor little soul.

He drifts away,
following an old friend.
Finally everything feels okay again,
for the first time in many years.

He see a light,
so bright and warm.
He takes the flight,
and flee into the night.

Finally he is safe,
and no longer afraid.
He walks through a cave,
what a beautiful sight.

He is no longer alone,
but with people to love.
He is forever gone,
to the magic world upon.

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  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Loved reading your poem. This shows that you really do have skill in writing. Your talent shines brightly through this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow .. this was written beautifully ,,very well expressed. . and nicely put through ..

    and in the end he finds peace..

    an amazing write ..
    and that old friend....hmm.. i dunno .. im guessing,,.maybe from before he was born?? o.0

    either way, ,simply superb. :D

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great and very touching piece.
    You have one mistake: Save in the eight stanza should be safe.
    I like whole piece, every stanza is beautifully written and the poem contains greatly created imagery. I just don't understand one thing:
    You wrote: -He drifts away,
    following an old friend-
    Who is he following?

    Keep up :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    I enjoyed this one, like before a great write..
    do keep writing :D