Devastated Soul

by Isabella   Sep 11, 2007


Doll so broken
And so torn
Rests below
The darkest throne
In the world
Bleeding and screaming
She's all alone
With no where to go
But to the place
That she called home
There she lays
Deceived and shattered
She's been there before
But now it's forever more

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  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Poe would love this. You honor him.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Great , great , great , great , .. GRREAT !

    amazing piece this. loved the lines,

    "..But to the place
    That she called home
    There she lays
    Deceived and shattered.."

    it was short, simple and packed a bloody good punch.. the feelings flowed smoothly. a superb write.

    keep it up :D

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, wow! Short yet so effective and powerful. You created excellent metaphor and said so much with a few words! Amazing poem, every line is flawless.
    Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    One of the best and most powerful poems I've read in a long tim! this was really amazing!

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