Until The Day I Learn

by Jundy Dynamyte   Sep 11, 2007


I hate you but my heart is keep beating on you.
All the sacrifice I made it worth for a while.
Each day I race the clock with you but if you die right know you know that I died too.

You know me well you know whats wrong I did it all, all for you hoping that you will see the sacrifice that
I made just, want you too see....

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  • 17 years ago

    by I Rita Valentine I

    Yo peepz havent u heard the new slogan:
    1st iz the worst,2nd iz the best,3rd iz the 1 wit the hairy chest! nah just kiddin lol. anyhow sorry got sorta carried away...yea that's me. back to u! i loved your poem! so sweet and b-e-a-utiful. ^^ 5/5 man! have faith! i'll add u in my prayers tonite! and also if u want check out my poems^^. i add u to fav's keep up great work!! sorry review/comment so long ><

  • 18 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    Im ur first vote.. :)
    i voted and gave you a 5/5 of course beautiful.
    :)
    please return the favor

  • 18 years ago

    by Jundy Dynamyte

    This is my first poem... its up 2 you if it is nice

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