Close your eyes

by Shama Sep 11, 2007 category : Love, romance / first love

Close your eyes,
do you see what I see?
A million dreams,
for just you and me.

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16 years ago
by Abu3li

Too short but too expressive

conveyed how much dreams you have and how you love him more than you think he loves you

good luck

Her Guardian
16 years ago
by Wake

Keep it quiet, dont let anyone hear ... amazing write.. u have truly captured it ..in just FOUR friggin lines.. awesome.

Great Job

~Wake~
16 years ago
by Cyma Khan

Short but powerful write....Loved it.
Great Job!!

God bless u
16 years ago
by waiting 4 some1

Hmmm very very short but...
very sweet and lovely one
16 years ago
by Kaz

Good job!! u have expressed so much in just four lines.. gr88