Changes

I don't like the first and the second line, they need some revising, but the rest of the poem is very deep, especially the line:
-forget about buying broken heart insurance-
You have good choice of words, but you should work a little bit more on whole atmosphere in this piece. That's just my opinion, I don't want to offend you.
Keep up!

Its kinda funny bc it sounds like your talking about something u can buy

but u really know its not at all like that

so i like it