5 Minutess !!

by haidy zied   Sep 11, 2007


When i thought i'd see you ..i thut i wouldn't Care
i Said if u Saw i ll Act As if you are not there !
but when i looked at u ...
it was like u were Here 2 REwind
Rewind Our past .... 2 Memories were Only Kept n mind
after i thought i moved over n left it all Behind...
Was n Ur Eyes I wish i was Blind
tht was in 2 seconds wid u !
My God ! Wuts happenin n wut shall i do ?!

ur smile was enough to grap Me from My Thoughts
Ur Words were Warm ..Took me from that Cold
My Heart Kept Calling u Desperatly n Kept talkin to U !
Ur Eyes Replied .... n Kept talkin too !!
My god ! am i Dreamin or its Really TRUE ?!
Not Thinkin not Breathin js Listening to my heart's Beats
Flying High ..Floatin ..cnt even Feel My Feet !
is that a MINUTE ?! hell i Need a CLUE !

Tongues ddn Speak .. Went All n Silence !
My Cure was n Ur Touch n U kept HEaling !
I Felt like um fightin my pain n almost Defeating ..
Now ur here ! my 3 wishes Came True !
If onLy u knew wut i Passed through !
if Only u Cud Feel me ..If only u CUd do !
U Wud Defnilty know Its all Abt U !
tht was n 5 minutes Passing Scene !
But a Lifetime for Me !

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  • 16 years ago

    by haidy zied

    Thank you soo much !!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    GOod one!!!

    Keep up the good work.

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by haidy zied

    Ur Right........ Totally Right ! i ll Work on It ! Promise ! lol
    thanks for ur Comment !

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    It's good.
    the only thing i suggest is redoing the way you write out of your poems. like the way you shorten some words or don't spell them right.
    only because then we have to try to figure out what the word's supposed to be and it takes our mind off the poem and the meaning that's in it.
    other than that it's wonderful.