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  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Hey this is a lovely poem..and its true the ppl that we fall most deeply in lov ewith its so hard not to hide our feelings for them,....but then again why wouldu want to lol
    keep up the gr8 writes
    bree tk care

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!
    very descriptive, it was great...so simple but too emotional and thats really good.

    keep it up!