Take Me Or Leave Me

by Dee   Sep 12, 2007


I felt like I knew you
I thought that I fell
In love with a man
Your touch and your smell

My heart would be pounding
I longed for you dear
Just to be with you
Just to be near

But now I sit here
All alone on my own
Our only communication
Is sms by the phone

What happened here Ben
Did we go off track
How can we fix it
Cause I want it back

You need to tell me
Be straight with me please
You have me surrendered
I'm down on my knees

Are you into me
Do you want me true
To have me close
Do you feel like I do

I know that Cherie
For her you still care
Her photo's still up
So you see her there

I'll not try to replace her
I want you to love me
For my inner strengths
And my unique quality

Don't shut me out
Down that brick wall
Trust when I say
Go boots n' all

I'll make you happy
This I will vow
I'll love you so deeply
Like I do now

This choice is yours
Take it or don't
The offer is limited
You will or you won't

I can't wait around
Too much is at stake
My heart is now hurting
And threatening to break

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  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Terrific piece of poetry. Emotion expressed so beautifully .. you're really wearing your heart on your sleave with this. I love how you get your point across in this - i want you, i need you .. but i won't forever.

    On the downside of it, you have just a couple of tiny errors in typing ..
    I'm not sure if they are supposed to be there, but i thought it ruined the flow a little bit. Not taking anything away from the poem, its wonderful to read.

    Very nice work.
    [5/5]
    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    I really liked that poem!!! good job!!! :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by TwilightSecrets

    I found it interesting and enjoyable nice job ^.^