Comments : Obsessive Compulsive Disorder

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Many that are unaware of OCD may not understadn the counting process of this poem. However; for those that know about the disorder and live with it daily it is the counting that makes this poem.

    I think you have done a wonderful job bringing this disease to light for others and paving a path for those that suffer to discuss it openly.

    Nice job

    --Sher

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem. I don't have OCD but I know a lot about it. I understood this poem fully and I think you did a great job of explaining it. I liked how you counted in the poem as well as the rhyming. The flow was also lovely and the poem was well put together.
    5/5

    Keep it up!!

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    Wow. That was strange. It was good though. It flowed really well. The scheme was unique too. I liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    Lol!!! There are not many poems on thsi site about OCD I have it myself I have a habbit of randomly standing up in class and closing the door I cant stand it and I have to like check it ifs closed -.- Its quite annoying and sometimes you can be picked on for having OCD but it doesnt bother me really ^^ Great write xxxxx Love you loads mwah xxx Love From Roxy

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Honestly i don't know OCD,for this one, i got a little confused due to the numbers but its very descriptive about it some parts rhymes so well..

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Alright, I take back what I said before about, "If I could be." Nah, jk. But this is EVEN more original than the other one. I don't have OCD but I have heard about it and i feel you have descibe this topic quite well. Keep up the good work. =)

    ~ Lainey

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    The counting quite makes this piece,
    reflecting sharp truth of what OCD is like.
    Nice topic choice, and nice execution.

    Keep it up!

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Interesting, but again, it didn't do much for me. I didn't <feel> your emotion on how you felt about this.

    However, I really liked the form; the numbers were a cute and unquie thing. Nicely done there.

    I want to give you a 3.5, but that's not possible, so I'll round up. ^^

    xTheEcstasyofSucidex 4.5

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    Oddly i thought that it was kinda funny.. i really enjoyed this piece... it was kinda "just a poem" but you obviously wrote it for a reason