Yeah i liked it , u told ur feeeling so clear and in perfect word :D

It was great, the rhyming was perfect, the way you expressed the emotions in this was awesome, 5/5

I like it cause I feel that way sometimes..how I fantasize and hope this great guy will find me...but alas reality is much greater than dreams. Good write and I can feel the emotion. It had great flow and I liked the metaphors that you used. Keep up the great work.

I like it a lot, it's greatly written, very descriptive with a lot of emotions and good choice of words.
My favorite stanza is:

-Yet fate seems so unkind,
For dream will remain merely as an illusion.
And that tale will only be kept in her mind,
Forsaking her hopes, forever it will stay as a delusion-

Keep up, 5/5 from me

I liked it i know writers block hate it 4/5

This is really good if you have writers block when you wrote it. The flow was wonderful and the wording was perfect. 5/5

Kalee , thanks for your comment

It was beautiful. I pictured all in my head, just beautiful. Still had a sad tone to it, a lot of emotions you have put in this.
Wonderful write, even when having a writers block.
5/5

Not bad for writers block

Aww. Beautiful! I think you did a good job with this one!