MY SON

by Kaz   Sep 13, 2007


Always thought I would see him live,
till I go off to my road,
never expected for him to leave first,
cant deny his strength,
I know he's still here,
memories of when he first called me dad,
another of his first day of school,
all flashing into my mind,
not ready to accept what happened,
my present, wish it was lie,
funny how we change what we prefer,
I still ask for an exchange,
his young soul for mine,
time may be right, so may be the decision made above,
mind knows the truth,
my heart fakes it,
what should I do,
I realize whats real,
not sure what to believe,
all I can say one thing,
that my son lived, loved, taught others how to,
now for his sake,
i gather my shattered pieces,
even though you've become another frame on the wall,
I'm proud that I got a chance,
I'm proud that you were my son

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  • 16 years ago

    by iluvbradley

    Wow!! That brought tears!! I'm very sorry for your loss. I love how you can just write from you rheart like that...you have a real talent!=)

  • 16 years ago

    by catalina

    I rele lik this, my bf commited suicide last week, and i have to say that the power of this poem is enough to make anyone have tears of joy. depression hurts, u gotta make the best of a bad situation. in a wierd way, thanks a lot :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    Whoa that was pretty deep.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow.. kaz .. wt u've done here is remarkable.. pretend writing isnt an easy joob n it seems you've mastered the ink in this one.. you really make it feel.. bloody good one mate ^^

    keep it up

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    A wonderful memory of someone you loved, well written and from the heart , that makes if even more special, sorry for the lost. Thats something we all have to learn to live with, that no one is promised tomorrow only today , so learn to live, love and enjoy every second like it was the last,,, great job ,,,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

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