And So I Did Write

by Marius Laun   Sep 14, 2007


You told me you loved me
And So I did write,

We were so happy,
And So I did write,

I saw then end nearing
And So I did write,

Then you left me
And So I did write,

You wanted me back
And So I did write,

But I couldn't take you
And So I did write,

So that was "The End"
And so I did write.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vodka

    Not bad but I've seen better. you should read my poem that has a repeated line in it. It might help. It's called forbidden. completely different subject, but yet very similar......

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    The repeated line is very powerful in this poem. I've done that before as well. It really worked out for you. It's short but hey it didn't give you a lot of time to mess up. Not your best but it still has a message that got to me. 4.

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