Please Don't Go, Don't Wanna Miss You

Its really good.

but If you'd like some advice...
take Some of the rym out, it will make it better. like make it rym on the 2nd or 3rd line instead of every line, it would flow more as well as have more deptth

This poem is really good! i love the energy.

Capitalize the I's.
Wanna should be 'want to' it just sounds better and is neater.
"go and so" are not very good rhymes.

Someone once told me that rhymes with 3 or less letters aren't that good. :/ I agree, though I still use them quite a bit. Lke;; bed/fed. red/bed. So on.. I hate using them. But it's how my poem .. turns out.

Just keep that in your mind.
It's a good suggestion.

I love your poems i read a few other ones too. this poem is so great and so amazing. i only wish i could be like this with my boyfriend but i get so scared

5/5 oh how ive been feeling like this lately