Awww another beautifull heartfelt poem, i can just feel the words pouring from within you. getting closer to that 100 mark lol! congrats on another amazing poem.

Awwwww. goran you did it again. you wrote one of the sweetest poems, that makes me want to pick it up and hug it. one of these days i seriously need to find you books and just hug them. yea i know, im odd. ><

i love this.

That was... ineffable. I mean, it was so adoring, and would make any girl blush, but the last line... if any girl had a heart and wouldnt want to break yours, i dont think she would kiss you, but thats when you would know your heart wouldnt stop, cause she cared. I loved this piece. brings back beautiful memories. thanks 4 that flashback 5/5

Excellent!

i could say that this one don't attract me much, but there one thing that caught me..Your words are powerful!

keep it up!

Well written, short and to the point. Many can relate to this, which is a good and bad thing. Love is always hard to maintain and keep going. Great write I loved it.

Peace, Joe

I thought it was alright. I like the way you set it up. That sort of made the poem. 4.

How is it Goran that with so little word's you can make me cry?
This poem is so sweet and heartfelt, with an aura of innocence.
It speak so much like true love.

Awesome Write.
5/5 You deserve it:)
-- Elly.

Hey,
I think is a beautiful heartfelt poem, its simple and sweet. from the first line I read until the end it was interesting to read,
I think its amazing that you can describe something with so little words. 5/5
kisses stephanie

Awe it was short simple and yet sooo sweet. I loved it and gave it a 5.

"I would not kiss you
As
I don't want that taste
To tease me"

i love those lines...excellent metaphor, not wanting the taste...very relatable, great work 5/5

andrew

"I would not kiss you
As
Your lips are
So fragile
I don't want to break them"
This is my favorite line.
Dast Xosh, again sweet and simple and short but great.^_^

Wow...this poem was so simple and cute..I did love it a lot...
Nice write,keep it up:))5/5