Smile Because It Wasn't Me?

by Chelsea   Sep 16, 2007


Should we want to live?
though people die each day
should we be thankful?
though underground people lye

a son, a brother, a friend
died at the age of six
should i cry, mourn, and grieve
or smile because it wasn't me?

a father taken from his kids
just because a semi flipped
should i say i miss you daddy
or smile because it wasn't me?

people die in war each day
just because there trying to save the country
should i stand in silence for them
or smile because it wasn't me?

lives taken just because of an accident
a car crash because of a stupid mistake
a gun shot because people are angry
and no one seems to understand

should we want to live?
though people die everyday
should we be thankful?
that we are still here

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww hunny, this was amazing.
    This has got to be one of your best, by far. (:

    One Suggestion:
    "just because there trying to save the country"
    ^ Change -there- to "they're". :)

    Other than that, beautiful job as always.
    Iloveyou! :P
    --- Stephanie Lynn <3

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    We should learn from the mistakes they made so we can live a better life. we should smile because there suffering has ended and ours continue. its a beautiful poem and speaks in many volumes. what inspired u to write it?