I enjoyed it and glad your trying a new style i loved the words and emotions 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Excellent!

Nicely penned..great thoughts!

keep it up!

It was a great poem, what I like in this poem is the structure and the use of punctuations. I also think it flowed nicely, good job.

Very well done. Very discriptive. :) Keep writing.

I enjoy the different style approach you took in this piece. I think it has a very odd and intriguing rhythm to it. Emotive, unique, fluid, good word choice. Nicely penned!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Sweets, that was fabulous. :)
By the way, it's good to try out new things every once in a while with your writing. The poem was magnificent. I'll be honest and say that I can relate. Beautifully written. Overall: 5.5

--- Stephanie Lynn .+.