This sums up me pretty well ...

by ChloeLauren   Sep 16, 2007


What is it that you see in me?
I'm just an average girl,
I'm far from being amazing,
I'm nothing really special,

I make many mistakes,
And at times I'm a little crazy,
but thats wat Im like,
So love me or hate me.

I count my imperfections,
And I hold my head real low,
I don't look to the future,
It's just another tomorrow.

My hopes and dreams are damaged,
At times I tend to cry,
I get a little controlling,
And I suck at saying goodbye.

When I fall inlove,
I tend to fall real hard,
The proof is on my arm,
With each and every scar!!!!

Sometimes when I get angry,
I say things I don't mean,
So don't you see my love ,
I'm not as perfect as I seem.

Perfect i am not,
Norwill i ever be,
I dont know why people like me
Im just being me

I never get things done,
I never get it right,
My life is a constant battle,
In which i lose the fight.

I see people living happy,
Showing a lot of pride
Wanting to be like that
I decide to cry and hide

Eveyone seems to be happy,
Wonderful and free,
For i will never be perfect,
Coz i am only me.

If you look inside my heart,
And seee how much I cry,
I dont tell anyone how I feel
So therfor my hole life is a lie,

But what you wil see the most,
Is how hard it is to stay strong,
When nothing is right,
And everything is wrong.

My parents yell,
But I always try,
Im never good enough for anyone and,
I dont know why.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Smilie

    I LUV IT, IT REALLY GREAT N LOOK NOBODY IS PEFECT SO ADMIT DAT YEAS U'VE MADE ALOT OF MISTAKES. N DON'T 4GET 2 HOLD YO CHIN UP HIGH. WAT WON'T KILL U ONLY MAKE U STRONGER N IF PPL CANT ACCEPT DAT DEN *F* DEM!!!!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Mia

    That was great. and very true for some.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Keep your chin up

  • 16 years ago

    by daisy

    Good poem i like it just dont bring your self down so much. if you think your like that then you will be like that but if you think of yourself as wonderful then you will be . :)

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This sums me up as well as you... =)
    Loved it...
    But i'd like to say one thing to you: as far as i can see, you're not an average girl, you're a wonderful girl and a very good poet as well...
    keep writing always
    *isabel*