The mirror

by ChloeLauren   Dec 8, 2008


I look into the mirror,
What do i see?
A beautifull, strong, and loving girl,
Is that really me.

This is a true sence,
That i really want to feel
Life has been so rough,
so it just cant be real.

Going through all the hard times
Feeling all the pain
Living through the abuse
Trying to stay sane.

I have been told befor
that i was the mistake
These are thigs that make me think
that this all has to be fake.

So i look into the mirror
and ask what do i see?
Not a beautifull strong loving girl
This is what i wish i could be.

Thankyuu for reading.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Cool poem... loved it!
    It's sad at the end, but at least you have hope and a strong sense that someday you will see yourself in that way.
    The way I see it you are that girl in the mirror beautiful strong and loving, anyone could tell by reading that poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Deven

    Look ur not a mistake i thought i was too. but i took control of my life and im happy. u r who u r and no one can change that. this was an good poem^.^

  • 17 years ago

    by jessica

    You are not the mistake. they should of never told you that. this is an amazing poem. just keep ya head held high and don't let any thing bother you. just brush off all the negative things people say to you

  • 17 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Good read/write keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    Insanity is not a sinn,
    the real world is this hard,
    but no matter how hard it beats us down,
    you are still o so stronge.

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