My Bloody Halo...

by Escoffier   Sep 17, 2007


My Bloody Halo

The day my eyes open to life's evil ways
Was the day I felt love's true betrayal
Was the moment she sliced away at my halo
I didn't see it coming
Too lost in my deep love for thy
She made me bleed, like raindrops
I was soaked from head to toe
For years, you know
I beg for the return of my halo
As I became full of rage
My decently ran from the thought of what I went though
Knowing I am no longer a loving fool
I am just lost without you
Foolish me, you taught me what loneness was
Thank-you
Can you stop the bleeding too?
No, I thought so, I wish you would
I am tried of all the blood
Till then I send my love

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    Its very good, but I think some of the words you use dont exactly make sense in some senteces...

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    I have heart of a broken heart, a missing wing, but never a bloody halo. It was very unique n i really loved that. It was different, it was your own. 5/5 I LOVED ITTTT lol