Without you I'm nothing

by dhaxeeh   Sep 17, 2007


The first time I saw you
I want you to be my friend
but I realized I want you to be more than a friend
and I want you to be mine.

When I look to your cerulean eyes
I felt like I'm drowning in a deep blue sea
Seeing your eyes with full of love
It makes my heart melt.

Everytime when you're afar
Every second seems like a year
Waiting for you is like an eternity
but always remember I'm always here
waiting for you

Every place we conquer
You always at my side.
You're my soldier and been my lover
You're love made me conquer all.

I'm born to conquer the world
You're born to conquer my heart
Together we ruled the world
and noone can stop us.

I said to you; you're nothing without me
but I realized I was wrong
Losing you is like killing the other half of me
Co'z without you I'm nothing.

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  • 16 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Beautifully written, flows really well, nothing seems forced, really great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jstuckie

    Nice poem i enjoyed it

    comment back :)

  • 16 years ago

    by dhaxeeh

    Thanks!!!!!!!!C",) i'll write again another poem. thanks again for your comment

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

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