I'm A Failure

by Carissa Mitchell   Sep 17, 2007


Her heart was pumping oh so fast
She knew all along that she wouldn't last
All the tears that had poured from her eyes
She picked up th knife as she sighs

"What am i doing here, what have i done?
I'm a failure." She glanced up at the sun
"What point has my life got?
I don't make a difference i just cry a lot."

She raised the knife up to her head
All the hatred that had her lead
Herself on all this time
Coming to the conclusion she'd before mimed

It was time to end it, she brang down the knife
She had done the very thing as to end her life
Dripping on the floor the blood had spilled
It was her very self that she had killed.

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  • 16 years ago

    by divine divinity

    I love how your poem is so straight forward, how it flows so freely and reads like nothing is forced, i love the emotion of it and how it has a steady rhythm. great writing, want to read more!