PROMISE

by Kaz   Sep 17, 2007


Just walking down a street,
confused about my life,
every blink, every moment, passing me by,
flashes of what happened,
on that unfortunate night,
when you left me alone without saying goodbye,

just the love and kisses,
are all what I have,
every night in the bed with you,
is all what I had,
every piece , every shard of glass,
you pierced my heart,

time tests me, something i couldn't pass,
every question it asked, was about my life,
had no idea, but regret,
I just couldn't survive,

now I see, I feel,
that your'e inside me again,
now I know, you never left,
like it always was then,

I walked all along,
just to walk to your door,
to see you, find you,
make it up for us both,
god please do,
please listen this once,
give me mylife,
my life I had once,

I saw you right there,
when I opened that door,
ran to hug you, kiss you,
like never before,

a promise from me,
i take a vow right now,
only for us both,
I'll live by you,
forever , from now.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... truly touching, every stanza is greatly written, filled with real and excellently expressed emotions. I like your descriptions in this piece very much. Another one deep, honest poem from you that is really able to touch me.
    The ending stanza is excellent, it adds great effect to the whole piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Always and Never

    I do like this poem, alot. like your choice of words. but the rhyming was way off. like you'd get into it and i'd start to get into this flow, then it would just stop and i'd read, then you got into it again. but besides that this was a really great poem. check some of mine out and let me know what you think. Thanks and yours is a 4.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jstuckie

    Nice poem i enjoyed it

    comment back :)