Lost inside

by bleeding angel   Sep 18, 2007


Iam inn a big hole
its dark no light
iam insid somthing
that nobody will ever know
iam having a feeling
that i will be empty for ever
iam lost inside a hole
walking in circles
i feel that iam death
my heart is not pimping any more
i have no blood
i cant breath
iam lost inside my heart
i cant find the one that i love

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    You have a lot of spelling mistakes:
    Iam- I am or I'm
    inn- in
    insid- inside
    for ever- forever
    pimping- pumping
    i- I
    ^
    that leaves bad impression.
    I suggest you to express your emotions with more powerful wording and deeper atmosphere. That's just my opinion but this poem needs many corrections.

  • 18 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I understand how it feels. your writing is very good, never give up xxx

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