Awesome poem! Love the way how everything comes together and the way how you play with words. Just wonderful!

Did this really happen? its a good/sad poem

Really like this, Its an intresting poem!
5/5.. keep going!
x

Very good job!!
I love your style honey!! X

I totally now how you feel cuz its happen to me too!!!! great writing keep it up! if ya need to talk im here dear!
amanda

I can reallt relate to this poem, well done as usual 5/5

I can really relate to this poem babe you did a great job finding the words ! (and yes that poem i worte called forgiven was about the guy i meet on this site ) anways great poem!!!

So sad!!! i can really relate, which is super sad. It sucks that people actually have to go through this. I loved this poem... the word choice and fluency was great! you have talent!! keep it up! :o]

This is a sad poem, but a great write!

-SS

This is my favoriteeee.
i loveee it.
its sad tho.

i can relate to this the mosttttttt

great job
=]

Sad but a good poem!

Wow;; Just Wow.
This Is A Veryy Well Written Poem...
It Definitely Reminds Me Of Story I Was Told Not Too Long Ago, But Your Poem Gets The Point Across Much More Clearly To Me.

<3 :D

Great, just G.R.E.AT. I really loved it!
don't let him win the next time ;)

Its really nice.
your a great writer.

Cleverly written but so sad.. i know how you feel .. x