Thanks I really like it. But yeah I'm doin much better.

I can really relate to this poem...well done 5/5

Glad yuo have found the family,true one first of all.

the flow and the rhime at the end of every line is fantastic.

all in all, it's a nice poem, good one indeed keep it up.

Glad yuo have found the family,true one first of all.

the flow and the rhime at the end of every line is fantastic.

all in all, it's a nice poem, good one indeed keep it up.

Such a great poem... very powerful....
i liked it so much....keep it up...
wanna read more of ur poems =]

Very nice poem,,,kep writing

That's heaps deep; I like it.
5/5

I think it was pretty :)

Far to often.....help for the child in circumstances like this, come far too late. But I'm glad that you were able to rise above it.

Very nice poem, very powerfull words as well and it is very very touching. keep up the great work I'm looking forward to reading more.

Sounds very true

I love poems about life... Everyone can relate in some way or fashion... Especially this one...
The only thing i can think of that could take away from the experience is that some of the rhymes seem forced... but it doesn't take away from the 5/5

keep writing

Gr8 lines and rymes...i like your writing style...leep it up... 5/5

Strong words... keep it up....5/5...

Excellent poem 5/5

I really enjoyed this one.

Wow, what a fantastic poem, nothing else can be said apart from true emotion and true feeling end up with poems like this
well done i appreciate being able to read this