You created very original tone in this piece. I don't like last two lines they somehow don't fit but rest of this poem is great. I like the topic and some lines are superbly written, it is long but interesting, you expressed your emotions excellently. I enjoyed in this poem. I personally don't prefer friendship poems but this one has special rhythm and it is really great. Well done!

Excellent!

for this one, words turn into poetry, poetry turn into message..i like rhythm that you convey. i can feel much effort and the true meaning of of every words

keep it up!
pare^^

I really enjoyed it, I had to read it twice to understand it. But I think I finally got it.

I really feel this was well written. i write a lot for my friends because i owe so much to them. they really are the reason i get up every morning. i really hope they know about this. all of my friends love the ones i write about them. great job! 5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is not a long poem
but you might want to try adding punction to make it a bit easier to read
granted i don't like adding punction to my own poem but it does help the readers so it is something to think about

It was a good poem. great going.

This is a really good poem. It is always great to have great friends that will always be there for you. I know i have some just like that. 5/5

Kalee

Ahh, this is like so different then I would see Friendship poem as, so that was a new experience for me. The under tone was so sad, but in the end got a little happier.
Amazing poem.
5/5

This is a really good poem, you showed your dedication and passion for your friends i really liked reading it welldone :D xxx alex xxx

This one isnt bad either keep it up

I think this is a really good poem. It shows your love and your feelings for your friends in an elegant way. Great Job
5/5

Nice and heartfelt...an engrossing read that I connected to on some many levels. the flow was perfect and the format of the whole poem was just plain neat. My only suggestion....and you need not take it if you would rather not..it to make breathe another air...to breathe another breath as it makes much more sense...5/5 marvelous write