Wow really descriptive, rally adds to the poem, really well written, i love the imagery. :) really great poem!

Woot go aish, the way it rhymes and all the emotive language and stuff is so cool, it's awesome (Y) congrats :))

I really like it your a really good writer!!
amazing job

This is a beautifully written story (poem) that shows that youth isn't everything

Great poem, good flow. I like it 5/5!

This poem i really enjoyed.

Now i wud lyk 2 no, wat had inspired you to rite this marvelous piece!!

Anutha great piece of work id have to say.
It was a great read & the amount of story behind it really forced you to read on til the end.

Which was excellent may i add. lol

Keep it up.
*Hunny*