Tis a very good and strong etheree willow, one of my favs styles, and u did excellent with it, i give it a flawless 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Oh, great etheree, so beautiful yet sad, very touching and emotional. Powerful poem, with excellent rhythm. The ending is especially filled with simply but greatly expressed sadness.

Willow, this is positively beautiful!!!

This is fantastic - so simple, but very beautiful. It paints a lovely picture
K xx

It's been awhile since I've read such a powerful etheree and I simply love this piece. Great job Wenchsters!!

I love etherees they are truely beautiful and you pulled this one off nicely. So beautifully sad. The ending started of so sweet yet the ending so sorrowful which created powerful emotions within each word. I'm going to add you to my favorites you definitly have a way with words which I enjoy.. Well done keep on writing. ~Mel

I like it its very beautiful!

Love it, it makes me almost want to cry ='( so beautiful.

Beautiful and sad all together, well done!

5/5 Ingrid

I love this poem.
Seems very real.
I really enjoyed it!