I loved this poem! It said caring things in such a heartfelt manner. good job!

This was truely breathe taking. Love poems are hard to take my breathe away but if you do it then it's quite an acheivement in my eyes. This was short and simple but beautiful and capturing. I think the length was effective and didn't need any less or any more. The structure of the poem was different but i'm guessing your own personal style. This was actually an enjoyable read. I'll keep an eye out for your poems. Well done. ~Mel

Lovely poems you penned here, so heartfelt write, even though simply, you expressed them well within beautiful emotions, Breathtaking written!

Different but was amazing well done!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Excellent!

Great piece of yours

thanks!

Although i had to read it twice to get the flow, it was really great!.. :) It was simple yet so full of emotion..

great job! :)

Good job
loved the flow
and the structure
very unique
i loved it