Heartbreaking, I hate people like that, not letting others to be confident with themselves and say bad things behind them, grrr!
Poem itself was incredible, your imagery is so amazing and strong, everything run front of my eyes like a movie. Also, I think this poem is perfect the way it is!
5/5 Amazing write.
This was a good piece you invited your reader to feel everything but not really giving out the whole story. I think you should give it a little bit more back ground but all and all a good piece. Plot121
Nice poem. Liked the structure, it's very unique. I think you need to expand your vocabulary and use more descriptive words though. 4/5
But overall, this poem flowed very nicely and was well put together.