Comments : The Little Whispers

  • 12 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    For this one, i can say that something is missing..well i think you should add more ideas or more descrptive words..well due to it was short..i can say that i can't feel much of the meaning..

    but it was a great piece of yours

    keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lisa

    This was very well written and I'm sure alot of teens can relate. I wish people could realize the effect their words sometimes have on others. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Miu

    Heartbreaking, I hate people like that, not letting others to be confident with themselves and say bad things behind them, grrr!
    Poem itself was incredible, your imagery is so amazing and strong, everything run front of my eyes like a movie. Also, I think this poem is perfect the way it is!
    5/5 Amazing write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good piece you invited your reader to feel everything but not really giving out the whole story. I think you should give it a little bit more back ground but all and all a good piece. Plot121

  • 12 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Nice poem. Liked the structure, it's very unique. I think you need to expand your vocabulary and use more descriptive words though. 4/5
    But overall, this poem flowed very nicely and was well put together.

    Shannon <3

  • The ending of the poem wasn't good. It left me thinking what was the last whisper. It's good though. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 11 years ago

    by MEMI

    This is good heartbrakes are but they can heel if you find another person

  • 11 years ago

    by she

    I like that it's so simple but has so much depth

    the ending just makes you feel the hoplessness
    excellant poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    I really liked this poem!!
    it was beautiful in every way.
    it showed emotion, and suspense.
    and i love the title and the subject, it's something different.
    you did a wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5.