I enjoyed this piece very much. It is succinct and expressive and the ...... at the end of the lines makes the reader pause to consider the words

This was so simple but very sweet and touching poem.. well i can't understand italian (thanks for translating it in english but it seems that it sounds more sweeter in italian) keep it up

Aww. i really like this poem. its so wistful i believe is the word. nicely done. i like having the italian part in it as well. it adds.

Hmm, I always find poems apealing that have rhymeing and flow, And I genereally am not a big fan of love poems,

(but this is just me)

So for me the poem didin't really stick out that much, But the thing I do like about it is It has a deep meaning to it,

And I like the ittalian stuff, That was cool, (all though I don't know Italian)

Hey hunie.
nice poem didnt flow as well as your others one have but ehy who am i to say that because none off mine ryume lol... reallly sweet n a great idea off putting it in italian and english im sure many ppl will copy that idea!!!!
thing is because i know about that dude i can tell you do actaully mean what your writing and saying... so stop holding bk and jsut tell him how you feel lol

take care hun

I like the fact that its in two different languages maybe cause i understand them both. i like this poem because i often catch my self imagining the same thing at times with my girl that i've been away from for a while. i can relate to this poem... 5/5

I like how you wrote it, it was better in the text tho, more feeling somehow.

love the italian with it, its just like my poem, imagine, lol. lol. i love this poem so much, nice work.

5/5 david

Is tht the david you wrote about who has commeted?? yeah looks and sounds good
xhx

At first i didn't know what the hell u had rote until i scrolled down.....i'm a blonde...ha ha

I like your use of repetition. It's very effective.

Very well written dear! i really like the repeating you did...5/5 Keep it up!!!

MickeysBabyGurl