Drawn Apart Again

by Viola   Sep 22, 2007


It's you and me
Out in the cold crisp air of December
That's all I remember (or that's all I care to)
Walking in a dream- that was never awakened
The street lights flashing in front of our eyes
How could we not see the signs? (ignore all the rest)
Because there was always something off, but I refused to believe
Got caught up in your heart beat once again
Only if I could see- it wasn't beating to mine
So there it comes, Swiftly
Somewhere in the midst of our entwined realities
We find our way to each other
No more than to be drawn apart again
.................it's the way it always ends.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Finally, a new poem that has correct spelling and grammar, LOL. I really liked this, it was a great read. You used powerful imagery to really portray your emotions and kept it personal while also keeping it so that readers will be able to relate to it, I like that. The only thing was that the flow was a little off at some parts, nothing too serious, though.

    "Got caught up in your heart beat once again
    Only if I could see- it wasn't beating to mine"

    ^^ LOVE those lines, amazing.

    5.5
    :]