Cruel Boy

by lovely   Sep 22, 2007


You made me
who I am.
I love you
though you
only lied to me,
Cruel Boy.
I don't understand
why I'm only worth lies
but never time.
I can't block
the pain anymore.
But I still love you
and always will.
I'm sorry if
you can't handle that.
You're a fool.
I want to hate you
and curse you
but I can only love you.
Forgive me, Cruel Boy.
I am a love struck Silly Girl.

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  • 16 years ago

    by CEE CEE

    THIS IS GREAT!!!! I love it

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Wow. this poem. .just. .
    completely explainz the situation im in.
    && this was short. but. so full of emotion.
    it was. .simply. .amazing. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Powerful, but the lack of description and grammar really brings it down. The poem is strong, but without grammar, it is harder for the reader to really understand what is being said. And, the ending needs a little stronger of a kick. The poem was strong, the ending should leave the reader in shock. Anyways, I did enjoy reading it, just needs a few minor adjustments.

    5.5
    :]

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