Very Moment

by Insanity   Sep 23, 2007


There in that very moment
all my hurt seemed to fall
as I held a delicate flower
swaying to the dancing ball
my very heart was calm at last
no real pain seemed to pass
throw this demon that is my soul
as i held her close to my form
O how I wish that moment would last
for a eternity in time itself
and never would I have to look
at all the people gathered round
but sadly to my hearts dismay
the song ended and we went our ways
and now I could only hope
to hold her again in that very moment....

©Insanity

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Oooh this is super GREAT!

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Great poem, i think everyone that's every been dumped can relate to this.
    Only one thing..
    "the song ended and we went are ways"
    should be ..
    "...went our ways"
    still 5 /5.
    Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I wish i could hold my ex nice poem 5/5 filled with emotion maybe u can read one of mine.