Failure

by Bob Maloney   Sep 26, 2007


I'm trying so hard
I can't keep going
I'm getting so tired
The pain is so annoying

I pump my arms
My breath is racing
My face is flushed
I forget what I'm facing

I trip and fall
I am desperate for air
I know I have failed
And I cry when I look up
I was almost there

(This is figurative language, it's not actually about running)

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  • 16 years ago

    by makeupxxtypexxbeauty

    Great work...

    cant wait 2 read more

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Woah i love this one...its so perfect

    "The pain is so annoying"
    -thats exactly how i feel but u know i never thought of that sentence lol

    great poem over all 5/5

    *^*crow*^*

  • 16 years ago

    by Brie Anna

    This was a very good write i really liked it keep up the amazeing work 5/5

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