In your eyes

by denita   Sep 26, 2007


In your eyes could only see,
that you no longer loved me.
by the look in your eyes
i could tell that what you were going to say was only going to be lies.
before you could say anything i walked away
because i could not stand the heart ache or the pain
because i knew you were going to let me take all the blame.

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  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    Related alot to the honesty in this piece short but precise and to the point in very good way..excellent job...

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I like the last 3 lines

  • 16 years ago

    by denita

    Dedicated to lukas

  • 16 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    That's a really cute poem it reminds me when my ex blamed everything on me

  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    Short but very personal! I love it! 5/5 keep up the good work! you might wanna work a little on this poem, it feels somehow uncomplete

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