This is AMAZING.
i loved it.
5 out of 5 for sure!

____________xoxo

Amazing. I was something like this some years ago, so It is really touching me and I understand this person completely. I really hope it isn't you.
Emotions are so strong throught all this poem and clear and the pain ahh it just stays. And the whole atmosphere just crawling into the reader. Ahh loved this piece!

5/5! It really deserves more!

I definitely loved this one!.....

the flow was great and so was the emotion.. you portrayed such a touching story in such strong words...

amazing is all i can say.. :)

Excellent piece. I'd give this a 6 if I could. The flow was great and the word choice was good as well. It all seemed to flow together nicely to the very end. The emotion of pain and frustration were very real and felt and the reader can understand the struggles you face while dealing with your own pain. Great write, keep it up.

Whew!! this was long yet a very captivating and powerful poem.. great emotions that sets a great and vivid ambiance in every lines (it did touched my heart and i can say that i can relate on this one), the flow is flawless and great imagination.. (but one thing, my question is why did u put it in explicit poem while i can feel more sadness in this poem? shouldn't be putted in sadness site? i think it fits more in there)

DAMN ths poem is very deep. It was good fro beggining to end. its life stuff though. i feel you on this one 5/5

Excellent!

I like your ideas on how to create much message form words, you have a talent in describing what you feel, and that really cool! Same as the others. A well deserve 5 for it!

keep it up!

Sounds kind of scary, but amazing! 5/5

Powerful stuff!... i love the imagery, i think this is really well written in my opinion and i think it tells a story that only those who have experienced can understand. Great job
DnB

Wow, another very powerful read from you. This was just crawling with intense emotion and wonderful vivid imagery. You're a great writter. Another 5/5 from me.

marcella

I loved this...this is beautifully written.

The flow was flawless throughout the entire piece, the imagery you portrayed created very vivid pictures in my mind.

I don't even know what to say. I can't find a single thing wrong with this.

The wording, flow and imagery, mixed with the emotion, depth and intensity all come together to create a truly beautiful read.

Heartbreaking, yes. But beautifully and elegantly written all the same.