Memories

by Renee   Sep 27, 2007


Raindrops in puddles
of mud
covered sneakers
grass stained jeans
wet clothes
no umbrellas only
hoods that
weren't used
hands holding
pinky swears have never
been better

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    Raindrops in puddles
    of mud
    covered sneakers
    grass stained jeans
    wet clothes
    no umbrellas only
    hoods that
    (weren't) used
    hands holding
    pinky swears have never
    been better

    I would have said

    No umbrellas
    Hoods remain unused

    flows better in my opinion :)