This is a very wonderful poem.
I can relate to it,we're in the same boat.
=)

This a good. i know how ya feel too. 5/5

I love it!! i wanna give it to hte guy i love.. cuz he left me for my best friend.. it hurts to bad!!

I love it, Made me cry.

Omg i love your poem, im going through the same thing...when i was reading it i couldnt help but cry, broken hearts dont last forever..find some1 who will love you true feel better sweetie =)

Awww i loveeeeee it it made me get the goosebumps daym gurl ur good lol 5/5

I like it really good commet my poems plzzz!~!~ Always megan~

SWEET ND verry much relatable to me.. but its the othr way around.. i love this poem.. it really is relatable.. to me.. n i like the rhyming prob better thn mine ..lol.. well gr8 wrk done.. u put feelings in it.. n all frm ur heart thts the gr8 thin abt it.. keep it up

This is one of your better poems I think.
I loved this one.
Break-ups are always tragic, i like that you are giving this poem to him and letting him know how you feel.
I think it's quite a scary thing to do after a breakup, showing your honest feelings again but on another hand it's quite a good thing.. maybe this will ease your hurt and give you some closure about getting over him.
Great write :)

5/5

And take care,

xo angelique

Ie have been there before i understand how you feel, yeah it does suck , the poem is well excellent for ocassion.

This is fantastic poetry. Really brilliant. 5/5

Wow REALLY good poem you put so much emotion into it im sure the guy you give this to will see the meaning you put behind it 5/5 <33

p.s. unfortunately that poems you commented was true....

I really love this one..

Thank you for sharing so much! I loved reading and feeling it. Very good work

I really like this poem, i can relate to the pain you were feeling during this time. I hope everything went well.

This made me think of someone right now.. Ooh goddd u r amazing on this.. Wow, deserve a 5/5!

Once again, very sorry for that happening...but you did get a good poem out of it

I have been through some pretty tough break up's

always broke my heart but you know what?

"Can't let life get you down else it won't let you get back up"

You know?

Find that sliver lineing and hold on tight to it dear and eehhhh it don't hurt so much

^_~ but im sure you know that already being a hard core navy person!

WOOT!

::stages appears while he dresses in a classic outfit::

and the judges saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay

::judges hold up all signs of 5::

5/5!

xD

woot!