OMG how sad. Wow this poem was a big wow to me lmao. It was really good. And very sad but true. Keep it up. YOURE GOOD. :)

Wow, I could really feel the sadness and emotion in the poem. please keep writing...that was amazing :O
5/5

Very nice poem. Look back for spelling errors though. Other than that this is your poem dude! It flows very well, and is a true description to the horrors of war. keep writting.