Amor...

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Sep 30, 2007


Amor, I'll give you a golden ring,
If you tell me how love begins.

Amor, I'll give you a blue silk gown,
With gold laces hanging around.

Amor, I'll give you a little gold bell,
To ring the waiter when you are not well.

Amor, I'll give you the keys to my chest,
To have money at your request.

Amor, I'll give you the kiss,
That will grant your every wish.

Amor, I'll give you the key to my heart,
That we may lock and never depart.

[[BY THE WAY, THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE A SPANISH, NOT FRENCH, FOR THOSE WHO DON'T KNOW]]

~TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK~

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  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    BABY, I'VE NEVER READ THIS ONE BEFORE. IT'S REALLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKE THE
    "I'LL GIVE YOU THE KISS
    THAT WILL GRANT YOUR EVERY WISH"

    I LOVE IT BABY!

    BY THE WAY, JUNIOR'S AWAKE RIGHT NOW!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hermosa

    Aww that is so sweet! I really liked the last part

    Amor, I'll give you the key to my heart,
    That we may lock and never depart.

    I loved this poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hermosa

    Aww that is so sweet! I really liked the last part

    Amor, I'll give you the key to my heart,
    That we may lock and never depart.

    I loved this poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Awww beautiful poem
    i loved reading it!!
    i smiled lol
    beautiful poem!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Cute...short but cute.
    Very well done on this.
    Try and make each line
    that is in the small stanzas
    rhyme..it will help with the
    flow. 5/5
    1/5<-Poems i've commented
    <3Tay

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