Love

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Sep 30, 2007


A girl asked her love if he thought she was pretty
He said....no

She asked him if he would want to be with her forever
And he said....no

She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry
And once again he replied with a no

She had heard enough

As she walked away, tears streaming down her face
The boy grabbed her arm and said

You're not pretty,
You're beautiful

I don't want to be with you forever,
I NEED you forever

And I wouldn't cry if you walked away,
I would die

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  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    THIS IS CUTE. THAT'S HOW I FEEL TOWARDS U.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I really liked this poem it was very well done and I enjoyed the twist. I see alot of greatness in your work but I think you need to expand your work to more subjects and learn to write about a lot more then love. I would say this to any writer and I do the same myself if you ever looked at my profile you would find I have a wide variety of work Plot121

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